The world is witnessing increase in number data. Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. how does competitiveness affect individual is it positive or negative?

This
modern day, the number of criminal activity
rise
Suggestion
rises
significantly. Few believed in
must
used to form the superlative
most
societies have people, who have competitiveness and it is
positive atitude
Suggestion
a positive attitude
positive attitude
.
Eventhough
Suggestion
Even though
it is
good impact
Suggestion
a good impact
on
personally
Suggestion
personality
,
also
some negative effects are higher. Both of things
are deply introduce
Suggestion
are deeply introducing
are deeply introduce
are deeply introduced
in
further
paragraphs.
To begin
with, there is no doubt for competitiveness
arr
introduces an alternative
or
affected positively in human. Because of competition, people are
present thier
Accept comma addition
present, their
present their
present there
hidden abilities in front of the world
for
Suggestion
to
beat their competitors and
also
learn many of things
by
Suggestion
from
it. Other things is that people are trying to push their limits
such
as in the exam time students read for
long night
Suggestion
a long night
because of cracking their exam.
This
is good
espect
a distinct feature or element in a problem
aspect
aspects
and by
this
they are aware of
thier
of them or themselves
their
own energy. Beside
this
competitiveness is
also
very bad impact on the people sometime. People
are try
Suggestion
are trying
have tried
try
to defend their race in any kind of situation.
and
Suggestion
And
they try to some
sortcut
a route shorter than the usual one
shortcut
shortcuts
because of
thieir
of them or themselves
their
atitude
a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways
attitude
altitude
of clearing competition. And do some
crimr
(criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act
crime
because they have beat their
decenter
Suggestion
datacenter
decanters
dissenters
.
Such
as nowadays in the news spread in the tv. That exam paper leaked scam or business man killed by his brother. To conclude,
however competition
Accept comma addition
however, competition
is
good thing
Suggestion
a good thing
for people,
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
also
has negative impact which is not forgettable.
some
Suggestion
Some
people take it very positively, whilst other human
take
Suggestion
takes
part some illegal activity because of beaten race.
Submitted by sannyp800 on

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next: