Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Different countries face different challenges considering their
population
, development and growth levels and other aspects. The challenges that we are facing in today’s scenario will be enhanced in future if not given proper attention. India will be facing a
lot
of all challenges in the
next
10 years like increasing
population
, pollution, unemployment, uncleanliness and poverty. India is the 2nd largest
population
in the world which in a way is a root cause
for
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of
several other major problems. With increasing competition in
professional world
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the professional world
and unstoppable
population
in the country, unemployment will be at its peak in future. Another challenge would be
uncleanliness
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an uncleanliness
for which India currently is facing a
lot
of criticism. In order to overcome these problems,
firstly
it is important to make strict laws to control the
population
of the country by restricting the number of children a family can have. For unemployment issue, we need to make changes in our
education
system. It is everyone’ right to get
education
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an education
and a
lot
of young children in our country doesn’t get
this
right because of the high fees in schools. We need to make revised changes in our
education
system so that everyone can get equal opportunity to study and succeed in life and
hence
it will reduce poverty for which India is known for. Cleanliness can be achieved
with
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by
a change
in mind-set of people
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mindset of people
in mindset of people
and making strict laws and regulations. India has a
lot
of potential to overcome
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potential to overcome
the hurdles that it may face in the
next
10 years with
proper system
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a proper system
and
education
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educate
educating
the
population
of the nation.
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