The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It seems to be
a
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an
increasily
spreadwide
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spread wide
concern that the
internet
and the
information
that it brings have been changing the
people
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peoples'
lives.
Nevertheless
, that can bring both, good
thing but
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thing, but
also
bad things for our
currently
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current
days.
Nowaday
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Nowadays
, people run in their
lives
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lives, such
such
as with study, working, and trying to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
what the society stand as a standard.
For instance
, we deeply know that teenager
have
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has
the "must" thinking
aboult
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
about
to buy the most recently
cellphone
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cell phone
avalible
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
in the trades. We
also
can observe
a
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an
incriasing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
hunt for social "likes" through the social
midia
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
avalible
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
in
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on
the
internet
. People that try to flee
of
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from
this
usualy
under normal conditions
usually
usual
realise with more ease the damage that
our
plural of "I"
we
currently days give for us. Many
cientists
a person with advanced knowledge of one or more sciences
scientists
contests
stand that we never have
before so
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before, so
much mental
helth
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
heath
issues, and
many
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much
of
that is
for the overdose of the
information
that we have access every day,
researchs
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
tell
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tells
us that the
infomation
a message received and understood
information
that we have in one day today is the same amount that one king of the 18
centrury
a period of 100 years
century
had in one year.
One
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On
another
had
place into the hands or custody of
hand
, today the
internet
give
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gives
to us the
oportunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
and knowledge
for
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in
we
of or belonging to us
our
search for a better style live,
for
instance we
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instance, we
can research about how to lose our shame, or how to make a correct
fisical
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
exercise, and even how to speak another
lenguage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
, or make a cake.
Besides
, the
internet
can bring us near to our parents that are living
in
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on
the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
side
to
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of
in
the world, through video chats we can speak
wirh
expresses the means used
with
them and see them in real time. In a nutshell, we know that the pressure of our community in the present day
is not ease
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does not ease
to deal with, and the increased access to
information
makes it harder to keep in
a
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an
avarege
approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value
average
of the "social level". But it
is depend
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depends
of
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on
us to use
this
information
and tool (
internet
) for our good or not, we need to have balance and good sense.
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