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Successful companies use advertisement to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society?

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Fortune companies make use of commercials with the intention of promoting and enhancing the business. Development of an intriguing content as well as
selection
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a selection
 of a relevant medium for publishing
are
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is
 key to make them fruitful. In my opinion, advertisements
devotes
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devote
 a positive contribution to the society, because it helps people to make the right decision while investing money in
purchase
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the purchase
 of goods.
Firstly
, One significant factor towards the effectiveness of an advertisement is how effectively it can grab the attention of the audience.
In other words
, when the content arose curiosity in the target viewers, it is likely that it influence them and their by the tendency to buy the product is rooted in them.
Furthermore
, it is
also
 proven that an eye catching element in every
commertial
connected with or engaged in or sponsored by or used in commerce or commercial enterprises
commercial
commercially
 helps the publicity of the brand itself.
Secondly
, the mode of publication plays a vital role in the success of an advertisement. In
this
contemporaray
characteristic of the present
contemporary
 era, there
are
Suggestion
is
 a plethora of
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
medals
mediums
 out there with which one can promote a business. Social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
, televisions, internet streaming services,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
 to name a few, are always occupied with viewers. Considering the expected customer group, companies should
visely
in a wise manner
wisely
visually
 select the relevant ones.
For example
, selection of
facebook
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Facebook
 or other social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
 if the
antisipated
expected hopefully
anticipated
 customers are youngsters, or television if the customers are homemakers.
Suggestion
Smile
 yes smile
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