You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to discuss some fundamental but practical points regarding the
seminar
. I am Behnam, from Iran, and interested in participating
at
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the
seminar
willingly
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. There are
few
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points that I like you to provide me
more
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with more
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information
.
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Since I am coming from abroad as a foreigner, I would like to know where I can find information regarding the accommodation during my stay. the other things which are coming to my mind are as
follow
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: a. Dates of the program, because I couldn`t find enough information about the dates exactly. b. What types of programs do you offer in the
seminar
? I would like to have a clear viewpoint of the programs and decide in advance about participation in
special
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program, presentation or certificate
one
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. I
am
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really
appreciating
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if
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you
can
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give me comprehensive details about it. c. And
finally
and I suppose the most important and
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essential dilemma
is the fees. I need to know the
fees
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structure to
devide
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divide
decide
and set my budget for
this
seminar
.
At
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the end, I
am
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really
appreciating
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your precious time and effort
to read
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my letter and possible
further
communication. Thanks so much in advance. Looking Forward to Hearing from You Soon Truly Yours Behnam Behforouz
Submitted by b.beh.1986 on

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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