You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to discuss some fundamental but practical points regarding the
seminar
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. I am Behnam, from Iran, and interested in participating
at
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in

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the
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willingly
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apply

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. There are
few
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a few

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points that I like you to provide me
more
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with more

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information
.
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about.

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Since I am coming from abroad as a foreigner, I would like to know where I can find information regarding the accommodation during my stay. the other things which are coming to my mind are as
follow
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follows

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: a. Dates of the program, because I couldn`t find enough information about the dates exactly. b. What types of programs do you offer in the
seminar
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

? I would like to have a clear viewpoint of the programs and decide in advance about participation in
special
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a special
the special

The noun phrase special program seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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program, presentation or certificate
one
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apply

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. I
am
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would

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really
appreciating
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appreciate

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if
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it if

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you
can
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could

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give me comprehensive details about it. c. And
finally
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and I suppose the most important and
essentialdlemma
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essential dilemma

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is the fees. I need to know the
fees
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fee

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structure to
devide
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divide
decide

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and set my budget for
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

seminar
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

.
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

At
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In

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the end, I
am
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apply

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really
appreciating
Wrong verb form
appreciate

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your precious time and effort
to read
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in reading

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my letter and possible
further
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

communication. Thanks so much in advance. Looking Forward to Hearing from You Soon Truly Yours Behnam Behforouz

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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