some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

It is often said that children in boarding schools
is
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are
the best way to groom up children.
However
, other are against the opinion for some benefits of doubt. On the one hand, those who support day and night school as the excellent way to bring up children cited the various
benefit
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benefits
of grooming a child in the
boarding
weight down with a load
burden
which range from
children
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children's
child's
child
behaviour pattern to how they interact with children of the same peer group.
For example
, boarding
academics activities
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academics, activities
academic activities
academic academic activities
have a way of building
confident
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confidence
in children
as a result
of their of their daily duties which they are engaged.
This
tell
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tells
a lot about how the children speak in public place and how they interact with children of the same age. By contract, opponents view
this
point put that
children
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child
child's
loss their moral decadent in boarding academics and some may indulge in activities that are illegal without the knowledge of the school authority.
For example
, most of the illicit
acts practices
Accept comma addition
acts, practices
by young once today can be
trace
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traced
to their educational background that started when they were in boarding
such
acts include stealing, cultism and
such
like. It is sensible to conclude that both boarding and day
school
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schools
have their own merit and demerit. On
this
note, it is good to weigh the benefits of one over another.
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