Over the past fifty years, international sports events such as the Olympic Games and world cup competitions have played an increasingly important role in our society. However, many people think such events are an enormous waste of money, time and effort. Do you agree?

Modern human life has become very hectic when compared to that of the ancient days, in the
last
few decades. Many advancements have come like sports and technology, the education system, and many more, increasing the economic growth very effectively. Specifically, games and sports are playing vital role in the society, wherein,
atleast
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at least
one indoor game and an outdoor game is made compulsory to be learnt in schools, colleges and even at home. It is strongly recommended to grasp as many games as one can, as they increase the physical
stamena making
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stamina, making
stamina making
them maintain a proper health, which helps them survive for
long time
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a long time
. In order to gain
such
fitness, sports person has to take hygienic, healthy and timely diet.
Besides
, it
asssits
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ass sits
in equal balancing of mind and
body
, which requires accurate co-ordination,
otherwise
, things go worse resulting in many damages like illness, at times, life threat too. Depending on the nature of the requirement about what to gain from them, they are bifurcated into multiple categories, making the search easy to get.
For example
, cricket, badminton, football,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
are called
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is called
arcade games, which provides exposure to the outside World, increasing the fighting spirit to score the maximum, in order to win the opposite party. One has to strain the
body
, stretch for running, jumping or so, where there exists a heavy
body
movement. Few others like
carrom
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Carrom
board, table tennis, chess,
likewise
stuff come under
category
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the category
of board games, which doesn't require substantial
involvement but
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involvement, but
,
instead would
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instead, would
ultimately
engrows
Suggestion
injure
injures
the brain, letting it find out the ways to put forward the
next
step, so as to win the army.
Like wise
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Likewise
, many varieties are
emerged
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emerging, such
emerging such
such
as action,
adventurous
Suggestion
adventure
adventures
, puzzles, words, general knowledge, farming, cooking, shooting,
nevertheless
ending to these types. On the flip side, many people feel that playing
such
games is
waste
Suggestion
a waste
of time, money and spoils career too, which is not true. It is not a hyperbole to say that,
infact
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in fact
, they facilitate jobs, stabilizes career with a provision of high range of money, pride and bringing fame in the society. Both National and International sports are covered under these procedures,
instead
, the government recognizes the winners and encourages them with awards, prizes, rewards, medals, shields, career mobilities
,
Accept space
,
sundries. Thence, it is an aggrieved fact that playing indoor games or
out door
located, suited for, or taking place in the open air
outdoor
sports, impacts on the efficacy of an individual efficiently and stabilizes the enhances the mind and
body
efficiency, sternly.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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