Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a belief that reading books could enhance peoples’

imagination

and

language

ability while watching

has less effect on

this

. In my view, reading books is certainly a better way to improve either

imagination

and

language

skills rather than watching

only. It is true that people could build their

language

skills and a wide range of vocabulary by reading books.

Firstly

, books usually contain a large amount of words used in many aspects in

life

Accept comma addition

life, such

such

as clothes, exercise, eating, medicine and even technical words which could be easily to gain.

Secondly

, by reading books, we could learn how

to make

Suggestion

making

a full sentence and use words properly and flexibly. When people have these skills they tend to be extremely confident to communicate.

Besides

that, books could probably boost our

imagination

. When we are reading a book without any pictures, we would feel free to imagine what happens in the story in our mind.

For instance

, when reading “A little mermaid”, we could creatively imagine how life under the water is, how beautiful the mermaids are and how funny all the sea creatures is. Compared to watching

, we tend to absorb what is presented on

passively without reflecting it. By way of conclusion, people should maintain the habit of reading because in

this

high-tech world, we are easily distracted

from

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many things designed or written improperly which may resist our

imagination

and

language

ability.

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239 words

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

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Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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more and more people use private cars instead of taking the public transport. what are the reasons for this rising trend? what can be done to encourage people to use public transport?

Recent research has confirmed that 'human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life.' Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?