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Some people believe that in 100 years time, life will be easier for us while others are unsure about it.What is your opinion.

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In the recent years, many changes have been seen in the way of living. The standard of living has become higher and the way of living easier.
Hence
, some people are of the opinion that in that
next
 100 years,
life
 will become way
more easier
Suggestion
easier
.
On the other hand
,
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,
some disagree with
this
. Living in the 21st century has become easier than it was in the previous era due to increased inventions and
usuage
the act of using
usage
usages
 of technology. As and how time is progressing, the number of technological advances
are increasing making
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is increasing, making
is increasing making
 it much
more easy
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easier
 to lead a comfortable
life
. Cars
,
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,
computers
,
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,
flights
,
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,
nanotechnology etc.
are
Suggestion
Are
 examples to prove that human
life
has became
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has become
 faster and much more easily manageable than it was years ago. But
,
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,
at the same time, man is ignoring the environmental point of view. Increased deforestation, erosion
are leading
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is leading
 to
reduction
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a reduction
 in the number of trees. Overuse of natural gases and oils is not only increasing pollution levels but
also
 depleting other resources. At
this
 rate, in the
next
 25-50years, all the natural gases and other sources would no longer
last
, forcing the future generations to lead an early man’s
life
.
Thus
,
Accept space
,
in my opinion,
man
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the man
men
 can lead an easier and comfortable
life
 in
future
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the future
 provided all the resources are used judiciously.
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