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*With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these form of media will never disappear. What is your opinion?*

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There is no doubt, that the speedy development of technology is increasing day-to-day. Some mortals believe that traditional methods of acquiring ideas
such
 as newspaper and magazines
will sooner or later be eradicate
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will sooner or later be eradicated
will sooner or later be eradicate
. While, some opine that it is impossible to abolish the old method of passing
information
. In my opinion, I agree that electronic media is very efficient and faster, but printed media will never vanish out of existence completely.
To begin
 with,
majority
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the majority
 of people spend their endless time in front of a computer which is very convenient and durable in circulating
information
.
For instance
 the recent bomb blast at Sri Lanka church, Killing more than dozens of people was
first
broadcasted
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broadcast
in
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on
 the radio and television, before it was printed
on
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in
 a newspaper. E-books are not only portable and accessible, but
also
 the Price online materials are cheap and affordable.
In addition
, printed books
serves
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serve
 as an entity which can be pass to friend and family members. In which people
sees
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see
 as a valuable gift.
For example
, a preacher who uses l pad to preach in some African countries may be
view
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viewed
viewable
 as being
pride
address a deity, a prophet, a saint or an object of worship; say a prayer
prayed
 and not totally broken. In my opinion,
although
 ebook is very effective and handy, the procurement of
information
 is very convenient for most people. Electronic reference can be share through the internet. There are several websites which
information
 can be updated. Despite all these numerous advantages of conventional books, I still believe that traditional books can never be out of circulation. In conclusion, technology advances
such
 as E-books Amazon Kindle, are spreading in a very high speed and will definitely continue to provide us with comfort and multiple functions, but I believe that
printed word
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the printed word
 will never vanish from our bookshelf entirely.
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