Nowadays, people can buy a large variety of household goods, more than ever before in most countries in the world. Is this a good or bad development? Give your opinion and examples

Recently, myriads of people have become obsessed with purchasing varied kinds of

domestics

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goods more than before in many countries around the world. In my opinion,

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is a negative development because it can give rise to environmental

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, seduce people to utilise

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manufacturing, food

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rather than wholesome

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, and devastate the farming lands.

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essay would aim at elucidating the aforementioned notions in the subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, in the past few decades, people tended to buy a lot of products to satisfy their needs, which leads to detrimental effects on the environment. To point out

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idea,

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people perhaps

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people, perhaps

consumed a colossal amount of outputs that had been bought from the markets.

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, environmental

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can be expanded because of dumping wastes of humans products that cause water

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.

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, water creatures can be damaged due to eating these wastes.

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, many people burn their wastes to get rid of surplus

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;

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, air

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and global warming can be exacerbated.

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is due to the gases that, emit of the burning products and trapped in the atmosphere, lead to global warming and can damage the earth.

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,

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attitude of purchasing goods can not only promote addicting

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engineering, food

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more than the healthy one, but

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it may afflict farming and plantation. To clarify

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idea, when people always go to buy their monthly household products, they sometimes rely on junk

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that might afflict negatively on their health.

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,

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trend can exhaust the farming lands due to the vast consumption of the products.

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, in Egypt, rice is categorically consumed, so the areas are depleted by ploughing them more than one time. To conclude, a multitude of citizens

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fascinated to spend a lot of money on household needs than before, which affects their life. It can devastate the environment throughout by causing air and water

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and pay attention to the using of junk

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that harms their fitness.