It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, seems to be an increasingly widespread concern about the work-life balance. Many people do not think about to have a quality time with friends and family, these "achievers" always have something to chase, the aims are the priority
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in
of
their lives. But we should meditate about our fast passage on the earth. The questions that we should do are. Are we taking something with us after we pass-away? Do our achievements make us feel happier in a long term? Many scientists stand that our current style of life that impose on us a standard of "success". But, the problem is that
this
success does not bring us the happiness that we want, these social standards make us work more for buy things that will not fill us in a long term. The contrary of that, the world seems to "slave" us with the culture of
having
any place of complete bliss and delight and peace
heaven
, and not being. I think that it is important to have some time to achieve something
that is
necessary for the future, like "running faster" during a short period of time, for buy a house or to study in the university for a better
profission for
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profession for
professional for
provision for
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an item of information that is typical of a class or group
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, these are instances that will be used as
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an
investment to have a better
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life
in the future.
However
,
this
style of life should not be long enough to bring stress and make the life harder in a long term. All in all, people should to have a good balance of work-life balance, and spend money and effort in investments that can bring
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them a better future.
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