It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and tradition are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Tradition is a crucial part of the social sphere of mankind, as different cultures pride themselves in a variety of attributes. Some are of the school of thought that traditional values will become obsolete because of modernization, and are
therefore
incompatible. I completely disagree with the notion that our traditional ways of life and beliefs cannot coexist with traditional cultures.
To begin
with, our heritages remain a vital part of our existence and technological advancements have affords
us the opportunity to preserve and appreciate our different cultures. Suggestion
afforded
Furthermore
, it has been used recently to discover long lost treasures, scripts, as well as artifacts
. a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
In addition
, it has even shed light on obstacles
that can lead to the eradication of certain parts of our heritage. People can save materials Suggestion
the obstacles
partaining
to their be relevant to
pertaining
pertinent
ethinicities
on the internet where they can be stored forever. an ethnic quality or affiliation resulting from racial or cultural ties
ethnicities
For instance
, during an archaeological discovery in the Amazon jungle, in 2015, technology
was used to decipher and translate some ancient texts, which led us to understand that the long lost ways of food preservatiom
was what their ancestors used to eradicate some illnesses.
the activity of protecting something from loss or danger
preservation
Secondly
, with the world becoming a global village, a lot of inter-racial
marriages are between races
interracial
occuring
. More and more ethnicities and cultures are mixing up. The advent of come to pass
occurring
technology
has made it possible for individuals to stay im
touch with their traditional rites from anywhere in the diaspora. to or toward the inside of
in
I'm
Also
, there has been an increase in the bridging of the knowledge gap that separares
us, due to the fact that science and act as a barrier between; stand between
separates
separated
technology
has made belief systems more comprehensible. For example
, I for one, have been able to perform and partake in sone
cultural rites via social media platforms, over the years, as I have not been to my quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
one
nativeland
in over five years.
In conclusion, some people still believe that our traditions and Suggestion
native land
technology
cannot exist in the same world. I completely this
agree
with the thought process that cultural values Suggestion
agrees
amd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
technology
do not mix, because technology
has invariably saved
many cultures from extinction and made us more tolerable of ourselves. Suggestion
invariably saves
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