It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops.  Technology and tradition are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

    Tradition is a crucial part of the social sphere of mankind, as different cultures pride themselves in a variety of attributes. Some are of the school of thought that traditional values will become obsolete because of modernization, and are

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incompatible. I completely disagree with the notion that our traditional ways of life and beliefs cannot coexist with traditional cultures.     

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with, our heritages remain a vital part of our existence and technological advancements have

affords

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afforded

us the opportunity to preserve and appreciate our different cultures.

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, it has been used recently to discover long lost treasures, scripts, as well as

artifacts

a man-made object taken as a whole

artefacts

.

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, it has even shed  light on

obstacles

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the obstacles

that can lead to the eradication of certain parts of our heritage. People can save materials

partaining

be relevant to

pertaining

pertinent

to their

ethinicities

an ethnic quality or affiliation resulting from racial or cultural ties

ethnicities

on the internet  where they can be stored forever.

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, during an archaeological discovery in the Amazon jungle, in 2015,

technology

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was used to decipher and translate some ancient texts, which led us to understand that the long lost ways of food

preservatiom

the activity of protecting something from loss or danger

preservation

was what their ancestors used to eradicate some illnesses.    

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, with the world becoming a global village, a lot of

inter-racial

between races

interracial

marriages are

occuring

come to pass

occurring

. More and more ethnicities and cultures are mixing up. The advent of

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has made it possible for individuals to stay

im

to or toward the inside of

in

I'm

touch with their traditional rites from anywhere in the diaspora.

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, there has been an increase in the bridging of the knowledge gap that

separares

act as a barrier between; stand between

separates

separated

us, due to the fact that science and

technology

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has made belief systems more comprehensible.

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, I for one, have been able to perform and partake in

sone

quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity

some

one

cultural rites via social media platforms, over the years, as I have not been to my

nativeland

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native land

in over five years.      In conclusion, some people still believe that our traditions and

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cannot exist in the same world. I completely

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agree

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agrees

with the thought process that cultural values

amd

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

technology

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do not mix, because

technology

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has invariably saved

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invariably saves

many cultures from extinction and made us more tolerable of ourselves.