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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion

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Nowadays, every
student
 relies on computers for research and study purposes. Some people believe that the use of computers in education is a positive trend, while others disagree. I will discuss both views here and state my opinion toward
this
 trend. Computers are playing a vital role in
students
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student
students'
student's
 life.
This
 tool provides information
by
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with
 the click of the button. By
this
, students can only learn
knowledge
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the knowledge
 hypothetically, but
by
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with
 the help of videos and graphs, they can easily understand it. It helps students by providing them different techniques to
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 and present data as it is connecting every to world web. It is convenient to carry anywhere.
Thus it
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Thus, it
 reduces the need to sell books and notes. Let's take an example of developing countries; most
student
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students
cant
can not
can't
 get permission from their parents for higher studies; it can provide a platform for online education to
such
 students. But with all benefits, computers seem to bring ill effect on human health.
First
, most students spend their maximum time by using
this
, and
this
 is affecting not only their eyesight but
also
 back. Some students often complain about backache because of a different kind of posture. But the major problem with
this
 is that it is a disturbing teacher-
student
 relationship. The bond between
student
 and teacher is affecting.
For instance
,
student
 and teachers do not talk directly but via computers. To conclude, there are some negative consequences of computers, but the positive effect
cant
can not
can't
is
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be
 ignored. I believe if we use
this
 device wisely, it can provide a lot of opportunities to students for better education.
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