In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded. Why is this? What measures could be taken to reduce this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, there are many cities of the world have become overcrowded because of

rapidly

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rapid

populations

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population

population's

growth. In

this

essay, I am going to examine the reasons why

this

problem causes and the measures to overcome it. Thanks to modern technologies,

scientifics

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scientist

scientific

sciences

science

scientists

, nowadays, have carried out many experiments in order to help people stay healthy and make life-expectancy longer.

This

helps the elderly people live in the

lengthy

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longest

life meanwhile

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life, meanwhile

the rate of populations is still rising causing the overpopulation in the big cities.

Moreover

, people believe that they are able to find a better job when living in a city.

This

is because of in rural areas, they are facing a shortage of facilities to let them

accquire

come into the possession of something concrete or abstract

acquire

the knowledge and jobs,

therefore

, moving to urban areas is one of the major reasons to allow individuals to enhance their life.

Besides

looking for the opportunities, clean water, entertainment, transportations, and so on are easily accessible in a

megacity

than in a small town. The reasons I have given above are causing

overcrowded

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overcrowding

in the major cities,

therefore

, I think both governments and individuals have a duty to find ways to overcome

this problems

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this problem

these problems

. In

term

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terms

of solutions, I believe that governments hold responsibility for tackling over difficulties.

Firstly

, it is crucial that the authorities should provide modern

factilities

a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry

facilities

for all its citizens.

Secondly

, appealing the foreign investments into regional and mountainous areas to gain more chances for dwellers to get a job.

For instance

, Vietnam’s government

successed

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

successes

succeed

in inviting the foreign capitals in Ninh Binh province to give the poor a hand to have a job in order to

pay-off

the final payment of a debt

payoff

their everything needs. Naturally, individuals should

also

try

address

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addressing

these problems. They should assist the citizens living in a rural area have a fresh water to use,

for example

, drill a well-water, build a leisure

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

, or call upon city-teachers to come and teach students in there.

Moreover

, individuals should put pressure on governments to

impluse

compel to behave in a certain way

impose

their processes rapidly to solve all the problems. In conclusion, it is clear that major cities have become too big and overcrowded because of some reasons I mentioned above. The measures I gave are some examples

for

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of

people and authorities to follow and help

this

world better.