People cart eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the past, dwellers' diet was undiversified and could eat foods, which produced in their local areas.
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, because of advanced technologies, these images have been
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changed
when people can experience various foods in other countries.
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,
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causes both the pros and cons that I will examine in
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the one hand, thanks to modern transportation, people can try several delicious cuisines that they do not need to go overseas.
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, city-dwellers in China can buy Vietnamese bread in their own country or those who live in the North Pole can eat fruits as they cannot grow in a cold place.
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,
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improvement can provide a link of trading
foods
benefit
goods
among several countries, creating a huge profit
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economies
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, citizens, who want to have a permanent job, are capable of having a chance to find it.
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, an export company will hire more employees to meet import countries' requirements for manufacturing products.
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the other hand, imported foods have
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disadvantage points. When exporting the goods
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as fruits, vegetables, or slices of beef, exporters have to spray the fertilizers or preservative substance to make the foods fresher, which cause directly harmful to people's health. To illustrate, a thousand imported bottles of milk from China are
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finding
that it contains melamine causing a hundred of thousands of infant deaths in the United States. Another disadvantage of foods importing is the high price of overseas' products causing inflation in a country.
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, Iraq's authorities have to reduce the price of local foods to stimulate consumers to buy it. In conclusion, imported foods have its pros and cons that I mentioned above. I think
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trend should
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carry out
take
in order to balance the consumption of the local areas foods and other regions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dietary diversity
  • nutritional intake
  • economic benefits
  • cultural exchange
  • food miles
  • carbon emissions
  • local economy
  • food security
  • globalization
  • sustainability
  • supply chain
  • produce
  • importing/exporting
  • agricultural practices
  • cuisine
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