Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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These days, governments are

extremly

to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect

extremely

focusing

Suggestion

focused

on, spending a large portion of its

buget

a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose

budget

towards improvisation of the

transport

Use synonyms

systems, which includes buses and trains,

instead

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of investing

Suggestion

building more road networks. In my opinion the major reasons behind these developments are to

incourage

contribute to the progress or growth of

encourage

more public

transport

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systems and get some

monetry

relating to or involving money

monetary

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

to raise more funds.

In addition

Linking Words

this

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is a welcomed development, as it benefit all segments of society. To embark on, the

goverement

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

wants to emphasize more on the public

transport

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systems.

This

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would helps

Suggestion

would help

to reduce pollution level and decrease the

traffic

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congestion problem.

For example

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, In todays world, now and

then

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you could find yourself stuck in the

traffic

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jam.

Suggestion

the government

allow

Suggestion

allows

more public mode

Suggestion

the more public mode

of commutation, it would help to decline level of the

traffic

Use synonyms

congestion, so

governmnets

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

are more focused on these

system

Suggestion

systems

Moreover

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, it

could

Suggestion

could also help

also

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helps to increase

governmnets

Suggestion

government

government's

funds.

Everyday

Suggestion

Every day

many people would travel by these modes and pay some charges towards availing the service,

this

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will directly go to

governmnents

Suggestion

government

governments

funds.

Furthermore

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this

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is a

postive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

development as it will impact all areas

off

connects a noun with the preceding word

the society or even the environment

also

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. Using

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this people

Suggestion

these people

this person

would save their time from the road

traffic

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and less number of the private

transport

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help to reduce in the pollution control.

For instance

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, in metro cities during pick

hours

a covering for the body (or parts of it) consisting of a dense growth of threadlike structures (as on the human head); helps to prevent heat loss

hairs

, due to the reduction private cars, commutation would be easy and it helps to make less polluted

cilies

anything regarded as making something unclean

soils

. In conclusion, authorities are more incline

towrds

near

towards

toward

the public commutation because they have

Suggestion

aim to increase

daily number

Suggestion

the daily number

commutes

a passenger train that is ridden primarily by passengers who travel regularly from one place to another

commuters

using these modes so that they could see

jump

Suggestion

a jump

on their funds.

This

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development is

affermative

Suggestion

affirmed

affirmative

informative

in all and every aspect as it improves our

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

life

and the environment.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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