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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. what do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

#countries #amount #crime
A large number of
offence
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offences
is escalating
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are escalating
 in some countries.
This
 is mainly because of lack of literacy and financial
difficultie
an effort that is inconvenient
difficulties
difficulty
. There are
number
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a number
 of solutions which can be implemented to deal with
crime
.
Firstly
, the reason for most of the offensive activities, by criminals, is due to lack of literate people in
country
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the country
.
In other words
, illiterate people tend to do offence because of the resources which they are unable to buy due to their financial conditions best employment are closed
for
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to
 them.
As a
result many
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result, many
 of them struggle
financially which
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financially, which
 lead them towards
crime
.
Secondly
, most of people attempt
crime
 to have
luxuries
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a luxury life
luxury life
life
instead
 of common
life
. Willingness to leave
richlife
 switch their mind towards these activities. There are two effective solutions to
this
 problem, one way to tackle
this
 is to control increasing
population which
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population, which
 will hopefully result in
better financial situation
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a better financial situation
. By doing
this
 number of literate people increases, which help them to find better job prospects and live satisfactory lifestyle. Another method is to impose strict criminal rules, which
consequently
 reduce offenders rate and encourage them to give their
life
 an identity, by which they will become part of
this
 society where they learn how to live a happy
life
 to our own. In conclusion, population control and harsh tribunals for the offenders are effective in dealing with offending activities. If government implement
this
 solution,
crime
 figure would soon drop.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic disparity
  • propensity
  • recidivism
  • deterrent
  • rehabilitative
  • judicial system
  • corruption
  • socioeconomic
  • alienation
  • stigmatization
  • decriminalization
  • enforcement
  • gentrification
  • preemptive measures
  • intervention strategies
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