Some people use the internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience.

Nowadays, people
opt
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are opting
for
internet
in order to find out the solution
for
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to
their health issue. In my opinion,
this
is a detrimental approach unless having low-level diseases and
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about
it in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, to search for any remedy or solution for a
disease
by using
internet
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the internet
is a
cynic
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cynical
way of
treatment
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treating
.
This
is because every
disease
has its own background reasons and medical
specialist
and if it is diagnose wrongly, there could be a serious repercussions on the health of a patient.
For example
, a study by medical
sciences institute
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sciences, institute
of California has reported that, patients who use other sources rather than
medical
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a medical specialist
specialist
for curing their diseases are acquiring the rise in their illness. Another reason is that, people have graduated from
specific field
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specific fields
a specific field
in medical and have in depth knowledge about it.
This
means every
disease
needs a proper analysis from a medical
specialist
unless it is
very low-level
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a very low-level disease
disease
.
Furthermore
, in my opinion, for low-level diseases
such
as fever, cough, and headache up to a low-level we could take medicines by looking at some other sources.
However
, beyond
this
, there should always be a proper medical checkup and treatment from a medical expert. There are chances to avail wrong medicine
as a result
of lack of proper knowledge.
For instance
, recently, my friend who was having low B.P problem, took “Calcee”, which makes him hospitalized, later found out that his B.P was high. In summary, searching
internet
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the internet
for
personal medical issue
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a personal medical issue
can result in adverse outcomes. Meanwhile, in my view, for a very level
disease
internet
can be
search
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searched
but beyond which there should always be a medical
specialist
treatment.
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