Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

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There are two paramount aspects of everyone's
life namely
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life, namely
,
personality
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and development. A
person
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is known by his characteristics and I consider that
experiences
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experience
which may have in our life do more influence on our
personality
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and development than the characteristics we are born with. To embark, I believe that a
person
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do not
born
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bear
with characteristics, the
character
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of a
person
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is born
by
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of
his surroundings and experiences.
For example
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, the relationship of the parents of a
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is quarrelsome
then
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either the nature of a
child
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can be depressive or angry. Inversely, if the parents have a humourous and lovely
nature
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nature, then
then
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there can be a high possibility of a
child
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's normal nature,
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, if we take an example of a
person
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who went to abroad, his way of thinking will change with time when he will meet with different people of different
character
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, he absorbs their skills, style and
personality
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. The development of a
child
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takes place more in schools and universities because they spend most of their childhood's time there. A
person
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can improve the
personality
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by working experiences and be independent.
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, it is generally believed that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our
personality
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. Some people believe that the
character
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which a
person
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gets by his ancestor stays with him until the end of his life comes. They think characteristics do not change with
time but
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time, but
I consider experiences have much more influence on
personality
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because when a
child
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is born, he
can not
can not
cannot
speak and
can not
can not
cannot
assume things so how can he
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
the
character
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. To sum up, no matter you are born in what kind of environment or with what type of
character
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. Be more optimistic and do whatever you are going to do.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nature vs. nurture debate
  • genetic inheritance
  • personality traits
  • behavior patterns
  • heritability
  • twins studies
  • malleable characteristics
  • upbringing
  • environmental influences
  • critical periods
  • language acquisition
  • worldview
  • innate traits
  • personal experiences
  • psychological development
  • epigenetics
  • adaptive behaviors
  • cultural imprinting
  • temperament
  • social conditioning
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