Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

There are two paramount aspects of everyone's
life namely
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life, namely
,
personality
and development. A
person
is known by his characteristics and I consider that
experiences
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experience
which may have in our life do more influence on our
personality
and development than the characteristics we are born with. To embark, I believe that a
person
do not
born
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bear
with characteristics, the
character
of a
person
is born
by
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of
his surroundings and experiences.
For example
, the relationship of the parents of a
child
is quarrelsome
then
either the nature of a
child
can be depressive or angry. Inversely, if the parents have a humourous and lovely
nature
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nature, then
then
there can be a high possibility of a
child
's normal nature,
furthermore
, if we take an example of a
person
who went to abroad, his way of thinking will change with time when he will meet with different people of different
character
, he absorbs their skills, style and
personality
. The development of a
child
takes place more in schools and universities because they spend most of their childhood's time there. A
person
can improve the
personality
by working experiences and be independent.
However
, it is generally believed that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our
personality
. Some people believe that the
character
which a
person
gets by his ancestor stays with him until the end of his life comes. They think characteristics do not change with
time but
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time, but
I consider experiences have much more influence on
personality
because when a
child
is born, he
can not
can not
cannot
speak and
can not
can not
cannot
assume things so how can he
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
the
character
. To sum up, no matter you are born in what kind of environment or with what type of
character
. Be more optimistic and do whatever you are going to do.
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