Technology has caused the death of traditional skills and ways of life. It is pointless to ensure their survival. Do you agree or disagree?

The development of technology has caused the death of traditional skills and old lifestyles. Some people are questioning themselves now and

then

. Is it really necessary to preserve the old ways of living and the old skills? Let me use

this

opportunity to answer

this

question, personally,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

am completely convinced that it is essential to keep our traditional skills together with our old lifestyles.

This

is mainly because

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

value

culture

.

Moreover

, these two factors are a

source

of tourist attraction

for

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in

the country. I concur that we have to keep our old skills and methods of living because they define our

culture

and give us an identity.

Furthermore

, it is the way we live and the way we do things that differentiate us among other

people

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People

. Personally,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe

culture

is a

source

of pride

to

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for

many people. Owing, to the

above i

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above, I

above I

feel we need to ensure that our lifestyles and traditional skills will live longer, so that we keep our

source

of pride,

culture

. We have countries like

Swaziland

, they have managed to preserve their traditional skills

such

as dancing, cooking, dressing and hunting. To date

Swaziland

is a popular country only because of its

culture

which is

is

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being

unique. The

last

reason, which makes me believe that traditional skills have to be protected from extinction, is the role they play in tourism. They are a

source

of

tourists

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tourist

attraction. In many instances, tourists travel to very far countries only to witness how they live and do their

things

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thing

. One clear case is

Swaziland

, in

Swaziland

they have a dancing ceremony, which they usually hold in September, called Reed dance.

This

ceremony is very popular, and it usually attracts tourists from as far as

USA

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the USA

. For

this

reason the traditional skills and methods of living must not perish. In conclusion, it is crucial to ensure that the traditional skills and ways of life live for many

centuries so

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centuries, so

that

culture

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the culture

is preserved and tourist have something to enjoy.