Topic:- you recently receiy a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job.you think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend .IN your letter •say why he/she would not enjoy going to college •explain why getting a job is a good for him/her •suggest type of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear John I have received your letter in which you were asking me to reply with the advice whether to go to college or try to get a
job
,I am glad that you have expressed faith in me to suggest you something in
this
crucial decision so,
accordingly
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would suggest you
to
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apply

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do
job
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the job
a job

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and will explain you the reason why.
firstly
,
i
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would like to explain
you
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to you

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the disadvantages,
i
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I

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think you would not enjoy
to go
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going

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college as
there
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their

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many
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are many

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students
tend
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who tend

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to come
for
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to

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the
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apply

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parties only not for studies.
secondly
, college would be charging huge fees as you haven’t given their entrance exam,
hence
you would be wasting your time and money. On
the
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apply

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another
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other

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hand, advantage to do
job
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the job

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is you would
be explore
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be explored

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to
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apply

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the working environment with differently aged and experienced people
however
buy
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by

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earning money you would get the value of money and be
self dependent
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self-dependent

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.
Lastly
,
i
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I

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would like to suggest
you
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to you

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the
job
options as you are assiduous with excellent communication
skill
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skills

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it is advisable to do
job
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a job

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at call centres and receptions and broaden your horizon. Good luck
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