Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is correctly said that due to
improvement
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the improvement
of our surroundings, individuals can not do anything. With the help of Governments and big companies only, development of nature is possible.
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, it is
quitely
with low volume
quietly
cutely
right to say that Governments can do a
lot
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forbetter
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of a better environment
of better environment
for better environment
environment
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. In the same way, the companies are
also
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resposible
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
for
such
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development. But we
can not
can not
cannot
ignore the people too who constantly living in an
environment
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This
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essay will discuss both these points. Now-a-days, Governments
takes
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take
lots of policies and rules to protect the
environment
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For instance
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, in India, the Government introduces E-
rikshaw
a small two-wheeled cart for one passenger; pulled by one person
rickshaw
rickshaws
instead
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of vehicles. Because of that to some extent control over air pollution. Despite
this
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, todays MNC
are
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is also providing
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providing lots of
trining
activity leading to skilled behavior
training
turning
trimming
to their executives how to improve their surroundings.
For example
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, the company like CSC gives training to their
memebersevery
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six
month
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months
how to control water pollution
witheffective
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with effective
measures.
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why, Governments and large companies are mostly
resposible
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
for changing the
environment
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. On the
otherhand
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other hand
, despite knowing about these Governments and companies, individuals can
also
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do a
lot
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for
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of
protect
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protecting
their surroundings.
As
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As, for
for example
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, in India, in the state of Assam, the people are so aware about planting the trees. They plant 100 trees per week as a
resposible
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
citizen in the country.
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, I agree with the view that nationals can
also
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do a
lot
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for changing their
environment
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. To sum up, I agree that not only Governments and companies are responsible for making a change in the
environment
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, but
also
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people doing a
lot
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for
this
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.
That is
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why, all have to work together for better improvement of our
environment
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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