some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but some of them should be allowed to unpaid work to help the community

Many people feel that not all

criminal

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criminals

should be kept in jail, but they believe that if they worked in jobs

with out

in absence of

without

salary they could help the society. And I completely disagree with that.

Firstly if

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Firstly, if

we let felons

work

in unpaid jobs they will have nothing to worry about, and as consequence of that they will keep committing crimes and that’s dangerous for the

community

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community, for

for

example many

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example, many

Thieves and malefactors came from a poor environment and as result many of them chose to steal and kill

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moreover

we can’t fix their problem by making them poorer

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however

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However

the concept of letting rebellious people out of cells to

work

will not be a good solution for the long run. Apart from

that another

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that, another

we can give the opportunity for jobless people to

work

instead

of malefactors

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in the era of development many factories and companies replaced the employees with robots which lead to an unemployment community

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anyway we can make people

work

rather than those criminals in

this

order we can build

better future

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a better future

better futures

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for

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For

example these

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example, these

people can

work

in any job and we can invest their youth in the to make the upcoming situation much

more better

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better

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In conclusion

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I believe that if we release the criminals to the,

public the

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public, the

community will suffer from them

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but alternatively we can use the unemployment people to

work

in contrast

of the malefactors,

furthermore

felons

has already lost

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have already lost

had already lost

everything in life so they have nothing to care about and they are ready

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for

committing

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

crimes.

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