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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the
environment
; only governments and large companies can make a difference. I don’t agree with the suggested phrase. I believe that Individuals can improve the
environment
, because the change
start
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starts
 with us. If you have a micro view of the situation, every single individual
is adding
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is added
 to the count that results
into
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in
 billions of people leaving on the earth. So, every small change that each of us can do, will have a big impact on the
environment
.
On the other hand
, governments and companies are
also
 very important to improve the
environment
. Governments because they can implement rules that will help to regulate people and companies’ environmental impact and
also
 implement actions to save the planet, like plant more trees, find a sustainable way to manage waste and many others. Companies can
also
 help the process because they produce a large amount of waste using non-environmental materials to fabric their products and they
also
 produce a lot of bad
gases
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gas
for
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in
 the atmosphere on their industries. So, if they choose to change the materials for biodegradable and implement gas filters on their fabrics, they will have a huge impact on the
environment
. The
environment
 is getting
worst
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worse
 each day because humans are not taking care of it. Global warming is a good example of it, many countries
doesn’t have
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don’t have
 any more defined seasons, you can expect 30 degrees
on
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in
 winter and 2 degrees
on
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in
 summer, and that’s impacting the vegetables and fruits grown and the animal extinguishing. Everybody needs to help
saving
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save
 the earth and have more environmental friendly habits, like recycling waste, not buying plastic products, saving water and many others. That’s the only way we can stop the human interventions on the earth that are causing more catastrophes. Together we are powerful.
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