Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Whether or not having a
babyhas been a difficult decision for parents throughout in years. It is not only a difficult decision, but
alsoa big responsibility for couples. Especially the mother’s role in
thisprocess is more important than the
Nevertheless, there are some ideas that support the importance of fatherhood as much as motherhood.
Firstof all, the special relationship between
babyand mother have to be accepted. She bears her in her own body for 9 months and
thenshe feeds him/her with her own milk by breastfeeding.
Therefore, there is a magical relationship between mother and
In addition, it has to be respected decision of
womanfor having or not having children because it is a big responsibility
that isacceptance of a new life in her own body.
On the other hand, it should not be ignored the
father’s role in
thisprocess. Couples have to take some responsibilities by considering together. If a husband would like to have a child, his partner
alsoshould think about that. In contrary, a wife cannot force her partner for making a
child evenif she is going to bear the
Accept comma addition
babyin her body.
Thisharmony should be sustained in the process of growing children as well.
someessential requirements for their children, he should always help to mother.
one or some or every or all without specification
Furthermore, while children are growing up, some main duties of the
thisperiod. In conclusion, it should be approved that fatherhood is not able to be important as much as motherhood in the most situations.
However, being a good
haveto be objective of every prospective
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