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united kingdom tourists who visited certain Brighton attractions in a period of 30 years. First of all. In 1995, the

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. In 1980, the festival was the most popular with over 20%

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was the lowest with less than 10 % of visitors. In 2000, the proportion of festival

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off until 2010,

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there was a slight increase in the

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Art gallery

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dramatically declined to reach approximately 8%in the year

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2010. There was a gradual rise in the amount of

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starting from 2005 to 2010. In conclusion. The number of tourists who prefer to visit the festivals in Brighton remained the same for over 30 years with a steady change. Whilst, between the

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2005 and 2010, the

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had become more popular than it was, and overhead the Art gallery.