Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I would say that I agree with that moving
in
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to
a different country
definetly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
woudl
past tense of "will"
would
happen to various problems
inculding
have as a part, be made up out of
including
serious ones. I would like to explain
reasons
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the reasons
through my experience. When I went to America, I wasn'
t
able to speak English. It was my
first
time
to go abroad actually. My English skill was so
terible
exceptionally bad or displeasing
terrible
at that
time
. I never could tell my
hostfamily
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host family
, classmates, and teachers what I want to do and what I think or feel. It was hardly ever to
comunicate
transmit information
communicate
with people around me. So I was always alone and my frustration was getting bigger and bigger.
Also I
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Also, I
couldn'
t
understand
exactlly
indicating exactness or preciseness
exactly
what
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
said. That's why I always made mistakes my homework, which I did wrong pages, my
hostfamily
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host family
left me all the
time
and took a wrong bus to go home. It was a big
problem not
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problem, not
to ask someone help when I was in troubles. My mental became devastated. After that experience, I studied Englsih
harder so
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harder, so
I got some skills to tell someone my thoughts or feeling in
Eglish
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
. Of course I can ask help whenever I need. I
then
went to New Zealand. I enjoyed communicating with my
hostfamily
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host family
, classmates and teachers there. So I challenged to
tralleve
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true-love
entire
to come or go into
enter
the country by taking a touring bus.
Then
a thing happened. On the bus, a driver suggested to play a
games
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game
. I understood its
ruel but
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real, but
real but
rule but
Ruel but
I couldn'
t
understand their customs. So I was
confued
perplexed by many conflicting situations or statements; filled with bewilderment
confused
and didn'
t
have a good
time
then
. What I want to say is living in another country, speaking a foreign
languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
is really harder than we thought. Even if we can speak their
languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
, there are any problems or situations
untill
up to, before the time
until
we do use perfectly the
languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
.
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