Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the highly controversial issues today relates to whether developing
train
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training
and subway lines or expanding roads have more effects
to cut
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cut
down traffic jams. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view and
then
give my own opinion on the matter. On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of public transport
such
as train, metro considerably outweigh advantages of road widening. The main reason for believing
this
is that public transport are cheaper and safer. It is
also
possible to say that citizens may just pay a little money to travel by modern vehicles and these transports are driven by professional drivers so people can feel comfortable. One good illustration of
this
is a person was
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
by tube when he was reading
book
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books
or listening to
music even
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music, even
sleeping and need not to worry about driving.
On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact road widening help vehicles moving faster and more flexible. People often have
this
opinion because if roads are built more and expanded larger, vehicle capacity will
increase
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increase, thus
thus
people might not waste lots of time to wait so long. In my opinion, both arguments have their merits. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that developing public transport
such
as train, metro lines is the better idea to decrease traffic jams.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

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Example:

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