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You recently received an invitation for three day training program which should benefit you and the company. Write a letter to your manager and say. Ask To attend this program Describe the program Explain how the will benefit the company

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Dear sir, I am writing, seek your approval for joining
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 intensive training programme in personality development and relationship building. I am recently promoted as functional assistant manager in Human Resource Department, I personally feel lacking behind in many traits
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 as relationship management and teamwork. Since these traits are Must for my profile, would be grateful if you allow me to attend a training session, I recently got invited for. It is a
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 program, commencing on 5th June at Hotel Hamilton, organised by Young Aspirants Teaching Consultancy. The program will start with an orientation session, constituting
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in-depth
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 description of traits required to enhance professionalism.
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 two days are fixed for practical teaching related exercises specially designed to promote teamwork and relationship management.
Program
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 will not only be beneficial for me at
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 level but will
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after developing these skills I will be able to make better connections with companies clients and will effectively deal with interpersonal issues in
company
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. I hope you will think
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 my request and respond in
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 way. Yours faithfully
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