People should keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state.Agree or disagree?

Pay

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Paying

taxes to the

government

is a responsibility of every citizen of the countries who are earning. I disagree with the statement that individuals should not pay taxes to the state. The

government

runs from the taxes it collects. Taxes are collected by only those who earn above minimum limit.

First

and foremost,

Tax

money collected by

government

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the government

is used to fund basic amenities, provide various services to citizens and for

government

administration, projects, army and so on.

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is not wrong to say "

country

runs on taxes". It is very important for

government

to make people pay taxes.

On the other hand

, some people do not want to pay taxes because their dissatisfaction with

government's

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government

services

which provide to them

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which provide them

. They blame on

government

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the government

for

such

things like poverty, unemployment, but they are not wrong as

tax

revenue is misused in some unwanted things.

Moreover

tax system

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the tax system

is so

complex which

Accept comma addition

complex, which

make problem

to pay

Suggestion

pay

tax

Also

, some other factors are responsible in

this

problem like, unequal

tax

structure and

tax

rate. So, they do not go forward to pay

tax

. Not paying taxes can drastically affect a

country

's revenue generation, my own

country

, India, for that matter, but

then

, it is equally desired that

government

come

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comes

with a fair

tax

structure and

also

make people aware where the taxes are being diverted. Even decreasing

tax

rates can help a

country

to collect a

tax

. If

government

Suggestion

the government

make

Suggestion

makes

a faster system to collect a

tax

and make a strict law for

tax

avoidance, it might be possible to increase

number

Suggestion

the number

tax

payers. Summing up, I give my opinion by saying

that is

the duty of every citizen to pay

tax

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taxes

and duty of

government

to use it appropriately

for

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public.

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3Word repetition
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15Grammar mistakes
 

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Topic Vocabulary:

contribute
welfare
public services
progressive taxation
distribution of wealth
civic duty
social cohesion
tax evasion
economic disparities
social unrest
individual rights
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