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now a days some people think that public libraries are not necessary while other disagree.discuss both the views and give your own opinions and examples

#people #libraries
Libraries are the creek of knowledge which fascinates the
bibliophilic
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since the digital era is prevailing some people oppose that libraries are not compulsory.In my opinion,
statefunded
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state funded
 libraries certainly have become less important than they used to be;
however
, I cannot support the argument that they are no longer important
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To begin
 with
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,
the
information
 technology has made the public libraries less imperative, The primary reason behind
that
is
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is, information
information
 can be easily accessed on
internet
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the internet
 in a fraction of
second
 without carrying heavy voluminous books
,
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whereas in library people have to search a number of books thoroughly on a Particular topic.
Moreover travel
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Moreover, travel
 to an
athenaeum
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Athenaeum
 in a chock full roads is being time consuming and exhausting, for an instance if a person desires to seek an economic book
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he will prefer to search
information
 sites like google, Wikipedia,
pubmed
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Pubmed
 and Oxford Dictionary
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Needless to say people who have constant access to
internet
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the internet
 no longer visit to
athenaeum
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the Athenaeum
Athenaeum
.
On the other hand
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public libraries still serve some valuable purpose
,
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beyond doubt the online facts are new and available on single click
conversely
 libraries have
impressive collection
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an impressive collection
 of old manuscripts which are not available online
by contrast
,
information
 found online can be unreliable or false because there is no one to check the veracity of data posted online. For
this
 reason, libraries are still the best source of
information
 for research scholars. Libraries
also
 provide a quiet environment where students can read without facing any distractions. In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that public libraries is becoming tedious while technology has developed and has granted humans opportunities to get access to
information
 quickly.Even so, they are still needed because
information
 stored in a library
is
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has been
is being
 always reliable or accurate and it is irrefutable that the concentrating environment is only available at libraries.
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