now a days some people think that public libraries are not necessary while other disagree.discuss both the views and give your own opinions and examples

Libraries are the creek of knowledge which fascinates the
bibliophilic
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since the digital era is prevailing some people oppose that libraries are not compulsory.In my opinion,
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state funded
libraries certainly have become less important than they used to be;
however
, I cannot support the argument that they are no longer important
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To begin
with
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the
information
technology has made the public libraries less imperative, The primary reason behind
that
is
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is, information
information
can be easily accessed on
internet
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the internet
in a fraction of
second
without carrying heavy voluminous books
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whereas in library people have to search a number of books thoroughly on a Particular topic.
Moreover travel
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Moreover, travel
to an
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Athenaeum
in a chock full roads is being time consuming and exhausting, for an instance if a person desires to seek an economic book
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he will prefer to search
information
sites like google, Wikipedia,
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Pubmed
and Oxford Dictionary
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Needless to say people who have constant access to
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the internet
no longer visit to
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the Athenaeum
Athenaeum
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On the other hand
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public libraries still serve some valuable purpose
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beyond doubt the online facts are new and available on single click
conversely
libraries have
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an impressive collection
of old manuscripts which are not available online
by contrast
,
information
found online can be unreliable or false because there is no one to check the veracity of data posted online. For
this
reason, libraries are still the best source of
information
for research scholars. Libraries
also
provide a quiet environment where students can read without facing any distractions. In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that public libraries is becoming tedious while technology has developed and has granted humans opportunities to get access to
information
quickly.Even so, they are still needed because
information
stored in a library
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has been
is being
always reliable or accurate and it is irrefutable that the concentrating environment is only available at libraries.
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