A company has asked for permission from the local Council to built a factory in your area. Write a letter to the local Council stating that you and your neighbours think this is a bad idea. State what problem this might cause Explain where the factory should be constructed Explain what you want the Council to Do
Dear sir,
I am writing on behalf of all the residents of Connaught Residency, to show all concerns over, Eszec Private Limited seeking approval for setting up a sugar production mill in
proximity
of our dwelling Add an article
the proximity
area
.
Although
the company advocates that the project will bring employment. However
, we believe project
will not only hamper the environment but Add an article
the project
also
bring health hazards to local dwellers. The poisonous smoke emitted from factory
will result Add an article
the factory
into
lung diseases and the liquid waste Change preposition
in
disposed
in nearby water resources will enhance Add the preposition
ofdisposed
Correct your spelling
vulnerability
vulnerablility
of stomach related diseases among residents. Correct article usage
the vulnerablility
Moreover
, the noises generated at factory
site will hamper the peaceful environment of the Correct article usage
the factory
area
and will be the cause of anemia
and Change the spelling
anaemia
blood related
diseases ,among Old residents .
In order to maintain Add a hyphen
blood-related
the
decent living standards, you are requested to restrict the setup plan near our Correct article usage
apply
area
. However
, acres of land lying barren on the outskirts of the city will be best
place for Change the article
the best
factory
setup.Correct article usage
a factory
Doing
so ,the council can ensure Change preposition
By doing
development
of a downtrodden Add an article
the development
area
, along with ensuring healthy living conditions of our dwelling area
. Thus
, kindly permit the proposal keeping
well being of the inhabitants at prime and refrain Change the verb form
to keep
company
from setting up a unit Correct article usage
the company
near
Correct your spelling
nearby
by
the society.
Hoping to get a positive response from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Meenakshi Change preposition
apply
kalyan
Change the capitalization
Kalyan
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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