A company has asked for permission from the local Council to built a factory in your area. Write a letter to the local Council stating that you and your neighbours think this is a bad idea. State what problem this might cause Explain where the factory should be constructed Explain what you want the Council to Do

Dear sir, I am writing on behalf of all the residents of Connaught Residency, to show all concerns over, Eszec Private Limited seeking approval for setting up a sugar production mill in
proximity
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of our dwelling
area
.
Although
the company advocates that the project will bring employment.
However
, we believe
project
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the project

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will not only hamper the environment but
also
bring health hazards to local dwellers. The poisonous smoke emitted from
factory
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the factory

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will result
into
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lung diseases and the liquid waste
disposed
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in nearby water resources will enhance
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vulnerability

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of stomach related diseases among residents.
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, the noises generated at
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the factory

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site will hamper the peaceful environment of the
area
and will be the cause of
anemia
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and
blood related
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diseases ,among Old residents . In order to maintain
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decent living standards, you are requested to restrict the setup plan near our
area
.
However
, acres of land lying barren on the outskirts of the city will be
best
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place for
factory
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a factory

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setup.
Doing
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so ,the council can ensure
development
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the development

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of a downtrodden
area
, along with ensuring healthy living conditions of our dwelling
area
.
Thus
, kindly permit the proposal
keeping
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well being of the inhabitants at prime and refrain
company
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the company

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from setting up a unit
near
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by
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the society. Hoping to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Meenakshi
kalyan
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