The street where you live is in poor condition. Write a letter to local City Council in your letter you Explain the situation Explain the likely consequence Describe the change you expect to occur

Dear sir , I am a resident of Goodwill society and writing to show my concerns over the
ever declining
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standard of the main street in the society. The main street has proudly been a linkage between
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and main town for years.
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two
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the situation of the street is deteriorating . There are cracks all over, it is totally overgrown with weeds and accumulated with that leaves and
twings
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from trees on
the
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it's
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its

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sides. I am very concerned that the pits on it are major hazards to children and
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who can easily have serious accidents.
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the rainy

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season is about to
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so there is every possibility that these cracks will be flooded with rainwater, becoming
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the breeding
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place
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to
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Malaria causing mosquitoes. With rain, heaps of decaying plants remains can be washed into
draine
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drains

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causing the blockage of
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the sewerage
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system. As a preventive measure, I believe that repair work should be done immediately including filling of all cracks , uprooting of weeds and removal of decaying leaves and
twings
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twigs
things
wings

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. I
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you find my concern genuine and take immediate corrective action. Thanking you in anticipation.
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sincerely, Meenakshi Kalyan
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