The street where you live is in poor condition. Write a letter to local City Council in your letter you Explain the situation Explain the likely consequence Describe the change you expect to occur

Dear sir , I am a resident of Goodwill society and writing to show my concerns over the

ever declining

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standard of the main street in the society. The main street has proudly been a linkage between

city

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and main town for years.

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two

years

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the situation of the street is deteriorating . There are cracks all over, it is totally overgrown with weeds and accumulated with that leaves and

twings

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twigs

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from trees on

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it's

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its

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sides. I am very concerned that the pits on it are major hazards to children and

elderly

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the elderly

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who can easily have serious accidents.

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rainy

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the rainy

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season is about to

began

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so there is every possibility that these cracks will be flooded with rainwater, becoming

breeding

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the breeding

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place

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Malaria causing mosquitoes. With rain, heaps of decaying plants remains can be washed into

draine

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drains

causing the blockage of

sewerage

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the sewerage

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system. As a preventive measure, I believe that repair work should be done immediately including filling of all cracks , uprooting of weeds and removal of decaying leaves and

twings

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twigs

things

wings

. I

Hope

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you find my concern genuine and take immediate corrective action. Thanking you in anticipation.

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Your

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Yours

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sincerely, Meenakshi Kalyan

naresh

May 31, 2019

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