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Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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In recent decades, the dilemma question whether children’s
education
 should be paid by governments or not remains a source of controversy.
Although
 numerous people argue that national defend and security should be considered as more important, I personally support the idea of free
education
 for all children.
Firstly
, free children’s
education
 supports poor people
.
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.
 In many
third
-world countries, it is difficult for poor people, whose working time is spent almost for survival purpose, to approach/
afford
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affords
 the fee of
education
.
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.
 By paying the educational costs, the governments could assist poor children to have a chance of going to school. As an example
,
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,
 the proportion of educated people in mountainous areas of Vietnam has been increased quickly after 20 years of free
education
.
Secondly
, free children’s
education
supports
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support
 to social equality of social
.
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.
 One of the most popular aspects of social inequality is the shortage of
education
 in poverty areas. So, there is a need to help children in all over society to receive
education
,
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,
 because knowledge is necessary to reduce social gaps.
For instance
, various mountainous people have been given the chance to attend
to
being one more than one
two
 national universities thanks to the free
education
 policy.
Finally
, free children’s
education
 profits the sustainable development of countries. In light of the fact that
third
-world countries always have
high proportion
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a high proportion
high proportions
 of uneducated people, free
education
 helps to promote the rate of development. As a compelling evidence, the Human Development Index (HDI) and Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of Vietnam has have been multiplied by 3 times
after
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over
 two decades of releasing free
children
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child
education
 policy.
Finally
,
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,
 in conclusion, it is important to have
free
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a free education system
education
 system because undeniable benefits it generates.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • socio-economic disparities
  • government funding
  • educational institutions
  • enhanced quality of education
  • educated workforce
  • boosting the economy
  • dependency
  • bureaucracy
  • innovation
  • flexibility
  • parental involvement
  • financially responsible
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