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Children today spend a lot of time on social media. What potential problems could it cause and how would they be addressed.

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More than
anytime
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any time
 in history, social media has become more popular among children.
However
,
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,
 over activeness of youngsters over social platforms
such
 as
instagrams
 Facebook and many more has many detrimental effects on them. The
ensuring
following immediately and as a result of what went before
ensuing
 paragraphs will discuss all possible negative effects along with remedial actions.
To begin
 with, socializing platforms are big distractions for school going children. The increase in trends of being YouTubers,
instagram
 inspires children they eventually become more active on social sites, in order to gain popularity.
This
 not only distract them from
studies but
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studies, but
also
 make them over sensitive about their social status on
web
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the web
. What is
worst
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worse
 that, in order to increase
number
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the number
 of their fan following adolescents sometimes takes irrational steps of sharing their private photographs online
,
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,
 giving rise to instances of online blackmailing.
This
 ever increasing trend has given rise to adultery
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,
also
. The contents and posts shared often vulgar and have bad effects on a child's psychological development
.
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.
Thus
, it is evident that networking platforms have many
deterious
harmful to living things
deleterious
 effects on young individuals. As a course of remedial action prominent rolls can be played by parents.
childern
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Children
Childern
 are vulnerable
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,
so parents should keep them under
great
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greater
 surveillance.
For example
, In order to keep close eye on their young offsprings many parents found it
better option
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a better option
 to be a member of
group
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the group
a group
groups
 on which their child is socially active
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.
In addition
 to
this
, governments should ban online platforms adulterous contents.A Chinese social application 'Tik Tok' has been banned by payment of many countries including India and Bangladesh. With
this
 preventive
measures
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measure
 negative effect
of
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on
 social platforms on youngsters can be minimised. To Conclude, being hyper active on networking sites distracts youngster and exposes them to vulgar contents affecting their psychological development by hampering their innocence
.
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.
However
, effective parenting and judicial steps taken by governments ill effects of social platforms can be negated.
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