Children today spend a lot of time on social media. What potential problems could it cause and how would they be addressed.

More than
anytime
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any time
in history, social media has become more popular among children.
However
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,
over activeness of youngsters over social platforms
such
as
instagrams
Facebook and many more has many detrimental effects on them. The
ensuring
following immediately and as a result of what went before
ensuing
paragraphs will discuss all possible negative effects along with remedial actions.
To begin
with, socializing platforms are big distractions for school going children. The increase in trends of being YouTubers,
instagram
inspires children they eventually become more active on social sites, in order to gain popularity.
This
not only distract them from
studies but
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studies, but
also
make them over sensitive about their social status on
web
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the web
. What is
worst
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worse
that, in order to increase
number
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the number
of their fan following adolescents sometimes takes irrational steps of sharing their private photographs online
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,
giving rise to instances of online blackmailing.
This
ever increasing trend has given rise to adultery
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,
also
. The contents and posts shared often vulgar and have bad effects on a child's psychological development
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.
Thus
, it is evident that networking platforms have many
deterious
harmful to living things
deleterious
effects on young individuals. As a course of remedial action prominent rolls can be played by parents.
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Children
Childern
are vulnerable
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,
so parents should keep them under
great
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greater
surveillance.
For example
, In order to keep close eye on their young offsprings many parents found it
better option
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a better option
to be a member of
group
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the group
a group
groups
on which their child is socially active
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.
In addition
to
this
, governments should ban online platforms adulterous contents.A Chinese social application 'Tik Tok' has been banned by payment of many countries including India and Bangladesh. With
this
preventive
measures
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measure
negative effect
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on
social platforms on youngsters can be minimised. To Conclude, being hyper active on networking sites distracts youngster and exposes them to vulgar contents affecting their psychological development by hampering their innocence
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However
, effective parenting and judicial steps taken by governments ill effects of social platforms can be negated.
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