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Multicultural societies bring more benefit to the country than drawbacks, discuss.

#societies #benefit #country
Nowadays the world is multicultural,
theres
Suggestion
there's
 no place where you go or be that will not have someone from another country.
This
 is something
that is
 growing over the years because of technology, flights are more
accessibles
capable of being reached
accessible
 and the mindset of the people has changed. Back to 70s or 60s the world population did not could imagine about travel to another country in another continent, at least the board of
country
Suggestion
a country
the country
 that was near where you live, as from Brazil to Argentina
that is
theorically
in theory; according to the assumed facts
theoretically
theatrically
 close. With
this
 big change from the
last
 40 years, the people
has
Suggestion
have
 more chance to go to other countries and start a new life
however
 keep their culture and sharing whatever they live. The biggest benefit in a multicultural society is the chance to learn with
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 cultures, I'm a big example of that, since I came to Australia I lived with so many persons and different
nationatilies
people having common origins or traditions and often comprising a nation
nationalities
 that
this
 changed my lifestyle and my
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
life
life's
lives
 vision. Is almost impossible to say that the multicultural society is not the future as the world is becoming a total
diversity
Suggestion
diverse
diversified
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
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