Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

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Dear

Mr.

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Gilbert, I received your letter in my mailbox yesterday. I regret to know that the noise of the drilling machine that has been coming from my apartment

since

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the

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two days has been disturbing you. You have mentioned that the noise disrupts your

afternoon

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nap, as it typically begins from 1pm and goes on

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up to

4pm. I shall explain to you the incident that occurred. Some furniture at my apartment got damaged about a week ago. After some research on the internet, I got in touch with a contractor who agreed to mend the broken furniture, as well as

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the interiors of my home. He & his team visit my apartment each

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to work on the décor. The drilling noise in the

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is due to their in-progress repair work,

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shall be completed by early

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week.

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, beginning today, I shall ask the contractor & his team to reschedule their work time to morning or evening hours to minimalize the inconvenience caused to you. I hope

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will resolve the issue of disturbed

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rest you are currently facing. I sincerely appreciate our co-operation and patience in

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matter and would again apologize for the inconvenience previously caused. Yours sincerely Anna

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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6 paragraphs

208 words

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