Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answers, include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Education
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has always been one of the major concerns in most countries. The
government
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will always allocate a significant budget for
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education but
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education, but
are dedicated to public schools.
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is especially true
from
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for
of
our country, the Philippines. In the Philippines, there are a number of private schools offering higher standard
education
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than public schools because they have
means
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the means
to acquire advanced technology to help improve their educational programs. The tuition fees from private schools are usually
expensive whereas
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expensive, whereas
, public schools are for free because it is funded and supported by the
government
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.
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, I believe private schools does not to need receive
government
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funding.
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, if the private schools consider to lower their tuition
fees perhaps
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fees, perhaps
, there will be an increase in the number of students who will be available to enrol and attain
better quality
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a better quality education
education
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.
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is true
from
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of
for
our country, the quality of
education
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differs from private and public schools. In private school, the maximum students per
class 30
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class, 30
whereas, in public
schools one
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schools, one
class can have 70 students with almost the same classroom size.
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, private schools are equipped with computers, whiteboard, projects and the classrooms are air conditioned. The students from private schools are from rich and
middles
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middle
class families who are available to spend money for their
education
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. While public schools only have the basic black board and wall fans in their classroom. In brief, private school already has the fund to sustain their facilities and equipment and does not need any funding from the
government
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.
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, the
government
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should increase the fund in public schools to meet the quality
education
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that private school can offer. In
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case, the graduates from public schools will be as competitive as those from private schools.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational equity
  • socioeconomic backgrounds
  • educational innovation
  • curriculum developments
  • alleviate
  • overcrowded
  • under-resourced
  • accountability
  • exacerbating
  • autonomy
  • innovative capabilities
  • divert
  • essential resources
  • government control
  • promoting accountability
  • implement
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