Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Travelling is the only leisure activity which renders humankind a healthy and stressful physics. While in today's contemporary era, a debate has taken place that rather a travel expert requires or not while anyone would be with a
group
on a trip. Along with some pros it has some darksides
too. But, if asked to a large extent, I ponder that the merits of having a location familiar guy Suggestion
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Therefore
, I agree to
the belief. My inclinations are justified in the ensuing paragraphs.
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with, it can not
ne denied that tour can not
cannot
guide
has some specific attbitues
which are hard to come by for a normal guy, final product; the things produced
outputs
such
as expertise in local culture, basic amenities in
particular area
, which can be used by a Suggestion
a particular area
group
of traveller as the God's hand. This
is because, travellers have resided from a diverse origin and culture which would be very new for them. Moreover
, with persistence lament it has been seen that mostly
all the Suggestion
most
tourists'
guides are multilingual. To support the former sentence, one of the most famous newspaper, The New York Times had published in one of their articles that due to Suggestion
tourist
guide
's juvanile
experience, the proportion of groups for travelling of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people
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has soared
have soared
developing country
.
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developing countries
a developing country
can not
be overlooked that some groups of people raise a loud voice against the repercussion causes on privacy. To support the cause, they put forward a can not
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convencing
reason, due to causing one to believe the truth of something
convincing
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an
exsistence
in the the state or fact of existing
existence
group
, travellers not suffer
in terms of communication but Suggestion
don't suffer
aren't suffering
also
daily schedule might be disturbed. One of the best example for this
is, Himalaya's trecking
, where a group
refused to take a guide
with them due to privacy issue.
To recapitulate, in my final analysis, it can be
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can be finally say
can be finally said
finally
said that, although
there is a darkside
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dark side
such
as danger to privacy, emotional intellegancy
regards to culture and root the ability to comprehend; to understand and profit from experience
intelligence
comodities
are on the plus side. Obviously, it is a matter of personal choice, but I think that having a articles of commerce
commodities
guide
in a group
is the rational way to explore any new place.
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