some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree ?

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There is a debate about the way people dress up, whether it can speak
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their culture and values or not
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I agree with the fact that the clothes you wear may tell a lot about the culture but the values you hold.
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one hand, the fabric or cloth that we choose to wear can tell a lot about our culture, origin or ethnic background as all of them hold some speciality and meaning with respect to that specific region of the world.
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, some nations have national dresses and an increase number of population tend to follow the trend while there will be some of those who do not want to be the part of
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the herd
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and want to have their own individual style. So,
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regarding background may hold true based on clothing.
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, saying that the way someone dresses up can provide information about the values or character of an individual is not completely true.
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part of personality varies from person to person.
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,
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belong to a conservative
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family, but
when it comes to sense of style,
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like being a bit modest in my choices but that does not define the moral values
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may hold.
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, the attire of an individual may not provide ample information about the character he or she beholds. In conclusion,
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would argue that anticipating someone's lifestyle and moral values based on their sense of styling solely is not valid enough.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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