Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

In recent years, we have not seen the diseases like Polio, thanks to the process of vaccination. These childhood diseases were the reason of the higher

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mortality rate, before the vaccines come

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into

existance

the state or fact of existing

existence

. I believe there should be a

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the collection of rules imposed by authority

law

to enforce immunisation of children, to make sure each

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is safe against those life threatening diseases.

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, children have very vulnerable immune systems, because of their age. Some organs that provide solid

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against these deadly illnesses, have not yet fully developed.

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, they should receive the necessary medications to provide that

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. Base

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the race, the body structure and the metabolism of a human body, these illnesses don't always target every single

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, but still providing them the desired

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, should be our highest priority.

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, if we look at some of the

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suffer from Polio, life becomes too hard and short for them. Children struggling to battle these diseases, are

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a sad reality

for some of the countries in Africa.

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situation gives birth to other bigger problems, which are even harder to solve.

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, decline in population, higher

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mortality rate, bad economy of the country etc. With children dying at

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an earlier age

, the overall future of the country looks bleak.

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, if the government enforces the vaccination as the

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required by rule

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step, each parent can be held

accoutable

liable to account for one's actions

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, the government provides some or all of these vaccines for free, so cost should not be an issue. Sometimes, the ignorance is a result of

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the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable

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of education, and certain workshops can bring awareness to people, which makes them better equipped with the knowledge to protect their young ones. In conclusion, I believe vaccines are the integral part of any

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child's

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child

protection

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and development. They should be enforced as a law for the safety of all children.