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People’s lives are now surrounded by advertisement. This affects what people consider important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 is dominant in people’s daily lives nowadays, with the high frequency of people having to see the same products or services over and over again. Some people think that
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 phenomenon is negative because it distorts people’s perspective on life. I completely agree with
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 statement. Admittedly, advertisements have certain benefits to modern lives.
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 of all, the purpose of a piece of
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 is to deliver key information
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 would assist a person in choosing a product, saving both time researching for the right product and potentially, money from overspending.
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, the advertising industry is getting more creative than ever, incorporating many current social issues in ads. Some people even consider
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 nowadays as a form of entertainment, especially with commercials in
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, I believe that the ubiquity of
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 is distorting people’s perception on what is important in life. Seeing too many pieces of
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 is thought by many experts to be the cause of excessive consumerism. People are encouraged by these ads to buy and own more stuff than needed. One consequence of
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 indulgence in buying new things is that people are buying more, they are
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 throwing out more stuff than ever, causing a burden on the environment. Another consequence of
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 phenomenon is that it makes younger generations become more superficial and only care about owning whatever’s considered popular. In conclusion,
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 can introduce many benefits to its audience, I still think that the oversaturation of
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 can bring negative impacts on individuals and society as a whole.
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