Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and gives your opinion.
Some people consider that prohibiting
tourism
in certain areas can keep local Use synonyms
culture
alive while others think Use synonyms
this
is of no use and change is Linking Words
unavoidabl
. In my opinion, banning incapable of being avoided or prevented
inevitable
tourism
in certain areas to preserve local Use synonyms
culture
is a wrong move.
On the one Use synonyms
hand banning
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hand, banning
tourism
does avoid local Use synonyms
culture
from being Use synonyms
extincted
. no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives
extinct
For
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example consider
the tribes living in Amazon forest or in African remote areas.Tour to Accept comma addition
example, consider
such
places are obviously not allowed legally.Today Linking Words
such
tribes have been successful in preserving their Linking Words
culture
as they hardly get to meet any outsider.So their Use synonyms
culture
has never been influenced by any Use synonyms
outsiders
cultures.
Suggestion
outsider
On the other
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hand banning
Accept comma addition
hand, banning
tourism
causes great loss both for the local Use synonyms
area
and for the tourists.It dwindles the local income as Use synonyms
tourism
can be the source of that Use synonyms
area
's finance.Use synonyms
For
Linking Words
example consider
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example, consider
,
Innumerable Foreigners and Indians visit Goa almost Accept space
,
everyday
which brings lots of income for locals and businessmen.Banning Suggestion
every day
tourism
can Use synonyms
also
lead to unemployment for many local dwellers whose daily wage comes from the tourists. And banning Linking Words
tourism
to safe places is like wasting nature's gift which is meant to be savoured by all.
As some people consider that change is for sure, I don't believe so.Locals can preserve their Use synonyms
Use synonyms
culture yet
allow the tourists to enjoy the beauty of their Accept comma addition
culture, yet
area
. Use synonyms
For instance
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,
consider Dakshina Kannada's typical cultural dance called Bharatanatyam, where locals exhibit their dance with pride and tourists enjoy it. In fact cultural Accept space
,
pecularity
of an an odd or unusual characteristic
peculiarity
peculiarities
area
can drive more tourists to visit the place, increasing the local income.
In conclusion, banning Use synonyms
tourism
in a particular Use synonyms
area
in order to keep the local Use synonyms
culture
alive has more losses than the Use synonyms
benifits
.And change can be avoided despite encouraging financial assistance in time of need
benefits
tourism
.
Use synonyms
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