Some people think Olympics are no longer important in the 21st century. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has been a tremendous increase in the importance of playing Olympics in the new era.
Olympics
Suggestion
The Olympics
has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
own advantages in bulk, on the other side, people are passionate towards it as
gives
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giving
given
them immense pleasure while watching and participating in games or sports. It is highly considered
as prestigous in
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as prestigious as
as prestigious in
winning medals or awards in
such
scenario,
instead
, it's very hard to get into too, as the competition is on peaks, so as the craze for them. On the positive side, participation
into
Suggestion
in
games makes a person healthy, maintain a proper diet, increasing the appetite. Well, when the body strains, automatically hunger starts, still, it
let's
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
lets
the person consume the food only to a certain extent
that is
fit and will refrain from taking extra content.
Although
, the body gets tired, both the mind and the physic are compensated in a balanced way with sound health, and so it is regarded as an exercise too, of course, which is compulsory in today's trend.
Also
, it improves the creativity and problem solving skills; A unique path to make out things in a right angle. Some games enable us
focus
Suggestion
to focus
-centric, in order to achieve the goal, which, in real life helps in concentrating on the right thing.
For instance
, games like shooting, badminton,
carrom
Suggestion
Carrom
carom
board,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
its
makes us boost our concentration and a spirit of winning. While, the other games like cricket, hockey, tennis and so on, gives us vast experience in doing hard work, fighting independently,
also
how to be a good team member.
Besides
, it provides us in nurturing the extent of our capabilities, talents and locate where we are lacking, shaping us ambitious and
sportive
furnishing support or assistance
supportive
. On the flip side, there are some disadvantages too, which are, though less than the positives it has, comparatively. To negate, we have to keep away from
usage
Suggestion
the usage
of few drugs or medicines as they might react adversely. Adding to
this
, one has to give one's time more on learning, practising, so as to win, for which, lots of sacrifices and dedication are required. The more commitment, we give with utmost goal-centric, the more satisfaction we get. There are very less people who distrust and feel these types of things are not required in
this
century, but, it is a well known fact how important these are even for the government and the
business men
the body of individuals who manage businesses
businessmen
, in order to maintain a streamline in the economy. Some games are considered as culture
too like
Accept comma addition
too, like
Foot ball
Suggestion
Football
, Kabaddi, Gymnastics, and many more. Precisely, I strongly agree
to
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with
in
the belief that these sorts of competitions and traditions are very much required in any era for the younger generation for an
engrowing
growing abnormally into the flesh
ingrowing
engraving
World.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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