Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects, other people think that in today's word, subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both views and give your opinion

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A common opinion is that
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is significant, whereas others assume that
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and
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is of the utmost
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when compared to
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essay will discuss
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views and give my own opinion On the one hand,
History
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is an important
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that should be taught at
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because it helps the
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to gain an in-depth
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of things of the past that they were not aware of. It helps them to understand some present trends, and appreciate them the more when compared to the past.
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, when
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an African student
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reads about the slave trade and what their predecessor went through,
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it will enable them to know the value of independence and freedom. And
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could only be gotten from
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like
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On the other hand
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,
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and
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in itself broaden the
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on new findings, encourages new discoveries, allows the
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to get
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in research which enables them to provide answers to
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questions, thereby
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, which will enable them to enhance
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the standard
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and
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, they can discover new drugs through scientific research, which can be used to improve health and maintain standard of living. In my opinion,
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subjects are beneficial in enhancing the
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's intellect just as
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and
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can help to improve life and standards of living, so can
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help the
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to appreciate the past events and their
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to the future.
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both
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subjects are of utmost
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and as
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should be taught at
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. Conclusively,
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the
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of
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and
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is assumed to be of utmost
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to some people when compared to
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, l believe
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subjects are beneficial and as
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should be taught at
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because they impact various useful
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to
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pupil.
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  • cultural heritage
  • critical thinking
  • historical analysis
  • contemporary challenges
  • economic growth
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  • intangible insights
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