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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to so in this.

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As per the latest trend in few nations, children get
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
opportunities
 to travel or
work
 between finishing high
school
 and graduation. While
this
 valuable year has enormous advantages for
youngsters but
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youngsters, but
also
 has few disadvantages. Which will we discuss here in essay one by one? There are different advantages of travelling and working after completing high
school
.
First
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The first
 and the foremost, when a child explore the different place and culture by roaming around the world, it
enhance
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enhances
 their experience of life and which help them to expand their horizon.
Moreover
, Travelling certainly help young people to see the real world around them and improve their thoughts
accordingly
. On account of
that they
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that, they
 become mentally mature.
For instance
, according to
latest
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the latest
study children
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study, children
 who have wider insight to life are more successful than other devoid of that.
In addition
 to that, during
this
 gap year some people might
work
 for money in order to pay their
fees whereas
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fees, whereas
 some experience the practical
work
 of their studies, which develop
better understanding
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a better understanding
 of their subject into them.
On the contrary
, few drawbacks may be worth noting of
this
 break before higher studies. Sometime people get involved in their
work
 and they love their independence in earning money and they skip the plan of pursuing higher studies.
Therefore
, it can affect their future negatively. Apart from that a few pupils might use
this
 valuable time whimsically by watching Television and staying at home. In conclusion, I recapitulate my view that
although
 break after high
school
 is beneficial for students if they use it in
right direction
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the right direction
 but it may be wastage of time for
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 student.
That is
 why, University and high
school
 should arrange
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 one year on the job programmes for the students
this
 will certainly help a lot.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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