Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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These days people
likes
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like
to travel fast and to avoid long ways because of that many of them are using Motorways.
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Along
with the advantages of
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Motorways.
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Also there
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Also, there
is some disadvantages as the air pollution and the high possibility of accident
.
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.
There are some
solustions
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solutions
for
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problems
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problem
which should be implemented to at
lest
used to form the superlative
least
reduce the dangers of
this
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Motorways.
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.One reason for
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the problems
is the damage that
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ways
cuase
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causes
cause
case
course
for
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of
the environmental.
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, chemicals that
been used
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have been used
used
were used
are being used
have been using
in cars or others have been a main reason for the air pollution.
For example
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, some families how had lived near to
this
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motorways had
saferd
undergo or be subjected to
suffered
from respiratory diseases.A one
soultion
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
for
this
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problem is to encourage people to start using
environmently
for the environment
environmentally
friendly cars and try to use
publice
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
transport more.Which, might lead to control the amount of petrols and other chemicals.
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, it will be possible to solve
this
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problem.
Scondly
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Secondly
. Another issue is the high rate of accident.
In
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On
motorways the incidence rate of accidents
are
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is
much
highr
advanced in complexity or elaboration
higher
than the normal due to, the high speed and the lack of traffic lights. Some people drive so fast even in bad weathers.
For instance
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,
their
in or at that place
there
was a study about the main reasons for people death and
the the
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the
first
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one was motorways accidents.One effective
solustion
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
is to reduce the speed limits for
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ways hopefully
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way, hopefully
way hopefully
this
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will help to save
people
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peoples'
peoples
lives. In conclusion, Motorways can be a
beneficail
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benefit
beneficial
. Only by following the safety
roles
a principle or condition that customarily governs behavior
rules
,
this
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solustion
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
will ensure that people will benefit from
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this motorways
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these motorways
this motorway
without any risk.
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