Research indicates that the characteristic we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any other experiences we may have in our life.

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Many
reaserches
systematic investigation to establish facts
researches
researchers
resources
have been performed in order to evaluate what affect our
personality
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and character. Some believe inborn traits and genetics play a major role in establishing our
behaivor
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behaviours
. Others believe that education and social
standarts
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standards
shape who we will become. With the finding of the DNA and the chromosomal structure, may publications focused on finding the genetic bases of our
personality
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.
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was based on previous knowledge that some families have certain traits different from the surrounding
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. Examples
to
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of
that include
narcsism
an exceptional interest in and admiration for yourself
narcissism
Marxism
,
border line
of questionable or minimal quality
borderline
, and
histerionic
characteristic of acting or a stage performance; often affected
histrionic
personality
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disorders. Despite social exposure these patients still developed the same
personality
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flaws their parent and siblings had. As a conclusion, inborn traits were reported to be superior to social effects in shaping our
personality
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.
In contrast
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to the above mentioned, other
researches
a scientist who devotes himself to doing research
researchers
were inspired by psychological
inovaitors
someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns
investors
and began to explore the social effects on our character. These focused mainly on child mother relationship as well as social interaction versus social isolation. These studies have shown, as an example, that social isolation led to a substantially more aggressive
behaivor
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behaviours
in
comparisson
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
comparisons
to other people. Another known example, have shown facial reactions of a 1 day baby when looking at
he's
male possessive pronoun
his
mother. The facial expression done were similar to
mather's expression
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the mother's expression
mother's expression
mothers expression
.
This
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show that
behaivor
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
is affected by the surrounding. In my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
,
although
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we are all
dectated
cause extensive destruction or ruin utterly
devastated
by
geneic
occurring among members of a family usually by heredity
genetic
generic
traits,
famility
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facility
contact and education as well as social
inviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
have a greater effect in deciding who will eventually become. Social interactions teach us what is
eccepted
generally approved or compelling recognition
accepted
and not, what is the correct manner to approach a situation and how to react
in
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to
it. Without it,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe we will not be who we are today. As always, the truth is somewhere in the middle. Genetics and
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
factors shape us into who we are and who we will react. Only by continued research will we find the final part of the
pazzle
be a mystery or bewildering to
puzzle
.
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