Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Language is the best way of communication.

However

, it is seen that many languages are getting disappear in

this

modern era. There are the people who believe that it will be convenient if there are less languages across the globe. I

also

support

this

opinion up to

greater extent

Suggestion

a greater extent

. To start with, in the justification of my notion,

first

of all, the less the languages, the easier the communication. There will be no language barrier and exchange of ideas among people that will ultimately help in developing harmonious relationships.

Besides

that, it will not only result in

flourished relationship

Suggestion

a flourishing relationship

flourishing relationship

among

masses but

Accept comma addition

masses, but

also

make political relation strong as there will be more chances of exchanging scientific research and invention.

Moreover

, having fewer languages will prove

boon

Suggestion

a boon

for students and

business men

the body of individuals who manage businesses

businessmen

. The survival in other countries will be convenient.

Hence

, the disappearance of some certain languages seems to have more positive impact on the world.

However

, up to some extent, it is irrefutable fact that language diversity shows the richness of culture and tradition. Fewer languages mean less linguistic skills. These languages are the identity of some certain community and tribe because languages are closely associated with culture of individual and devastation of these vernacular languages will take

toll

Suggestion

a toll

on diverse culture. To sum up,

although

, it seems to be necessary to save regional

languages yet

Accept comma addition

languages, yet

the declined barriers of languages will result in good psychological relationships among people.

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Linguistic diversity
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Language extinction
Communication barrier
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Endangered languages
Language revitalization
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Fully explain your ideas

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